In 3rd person on a train
On the train home today I was describing myself last evening and this morning in third person.
Like this.
"He took a seat. There were enough seats to sit on the train. He couldn't catch the train which was due 5:46 p.m. He took the next train.
Right after he took a seat, he took his pen from the pocket of his shirt and his sketchbook from his bag.
That time, he began to draw a car, but he stopped and began to write something on the same sheet.
He began to write his story of the night before and that morning, starting with 'He was worried if he would forget the next day was the day of bulky waste collection day. He wrote the reception number on the bulky waste tickets and checked the place of the items he was going to dispose of'.
Tired of writing about himself as 'he' in 10 minutes, he began to read a book on autism. He was impressed about the story when applied behavioral analysis met the parents of children with autism, and national autism association was about to be born in America."
Like this.
"He took a seat. There were enough seats to sit on the train. He couldn't catch the train which was due 5:46 p.m. He took the next train.
Right after he took a seat, he took his pen from the pocket of his shirt and his sketchbook from his bag.
That time, he began to draw a car, but he stopped and began to write something on the same sheet.
He began to write his story of the night before and that morning, starting with 'He was worried if he would forget the next day was the day of bulky waste collection day. He wrote the reception number on the bulky waste tickets and checked the place of the items he was going to dispose of'.
Tired of writing about himself as 'he' in 10 minutes, he began to read a book on autism. He was impressed about the story when applied behavioral analysis met the parents of children with autism, and national autism association was about to be born in America."
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